What do you think of this eulogy I wrote for my grandma?

I thought it was good and i always get bored at funerals! it diesn't have 2 b the perfect speech just something others that knew her can laugh at and remember. ... goid job wouldn't change a thing..besides ur an authority on ur grandma nobody else its not a book report where u get a grade .. just a speech showing u cared and it seems like u really did ... gr8t job